Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Trying To Catch The Sun Comments

Rating: 3.9

On the sand I stand,
Here, in front of the ocean.
My eyes gazing at the horizon,
My body as cold as could be.
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Lamerre Lucie
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Adeline Foster 03 March 2016

A lovely poem that emphasizes the role the sun plays in our lives. We know there also a danger and yet it can even be a friend. Read mine - Night Creeps - Adeline

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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

Catching the sun, you will always be in the light. good writing.

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Lucie Lamerre 03 January 2016

Oh, thank you so much :)

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Rajnish Manga 26 August 2015

Entire poem is a treat to our senses as it draws inspiration from nature. I have enjoyed reading it. A quote from the poem: I want to catch the Sun, And to lose myself into its light.

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