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There at the end the virgin counsels us
If we ask if she chooses
This is a black this is a white
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I'm always drawn to visual poems (the only kind of poem in my mind) . I like the dark and light and shadows. Kind of scary. It's like going down a dark alley in a Film Noir Here again, we have a doubling and tripling of words which really works! Reminds me David Mamet. 'Put that coffee DOWN! Coffee is for closers! Anyway, the poem is great. One of your best.
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7/26/2025 5:42:10 PM # 1.0.0
Cool Man! It's like a Howard Hawks. Nice!