Monday, January 18, 2010

Trying Hard Comments

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I was trying hard to fall in love
To fly to the clouds and the heaven above.
Take a dip in the ocean of emotions
Sort out my feelings and underlying tensions.
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Sumann Dutta
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Rahul Aithal 23 January 2010

Anger, wrath, frustration My body, mind and soul in an age-old starvation. Nicely expressed feelings. Keep writing.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 19 January 2010

I wanted to express myself in a few rhyming words I know I failed, but atleast I tried hard. These words stir so many emotions deep within....keep it up.

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