Thursday, May 12, 2011

Trying Comments

Rating: 4.5

If you're trying to hurt me, You're doing it perfectly.
If you're trying to make me feel worthless, your job is done.
If you're trying to break my heart, consider it broken.
If you're trying to push me away, I'm gone.
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Lil Sutton
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Daniel Warner 08 March 2012

If you're trying to make a good poem you have already accomplished that feat and I hope to see more, too!

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Dislocated Heart 12 May 2011

I love it.. I could completely relate.. amazing write.

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