Tuesday, January 13, 2015

Try To Love A British Pedant Comments

Rating: 4.0

When he reads he snorts and loudly groans,
and weeps at multi-exclamation points.
He cries in pain as if his ageing bones
are snapping when a clause goes 'and', no joints,
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Linda Hepner
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John Richter 19 October 2015

LOL! 'belonging to a century long agone! ' So brilliant... I often feel that way too - my own classical poetry pouring out - my macabre side sometimes mimicking Edgar Allan Poe - so I've been told. but I am a strict rule breaker - preferring rebellious English to proper - an American cockney I suppose... In any case this is a spectacular showcase of your amazing talent.... Wonderfully whimsical....

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 13 January 2015

Love the language and a good poem. Likes it.

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