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Very lovely poem & well articulated ups and downs of love. Favorite lines / stanza: 'We finally see Just what it takes To unconditionally love And up the stakes' Love the nurturing aspect of it!

Lovely lines that are loaded with love. A captivating composition that is very refreshing!

i'm sending your poem to another member, Bharati Nayak, because she sent me a note about 'love', and i liked your poem a lot. i think i forgot to send it to MyPoemList yesterday; i plan on doing it after sending this comment. // when i copied and pasted your poem, the computer underlined fulfilment (i guess it should be fulfillment) and seperate (separate) . i did not notice them before now. bri :)

PLEASE SEND ME AN ANNOUNCEMENT WHEN YOU TWO BREAK UP! ! ! I MAY BE INTERESTED. BRI :)

Emotion and passion Sparks our match Sexual fulfilment Keeps us satisfied..a great love poem.. the purity of heart....seducing the righ minded....... thank you dear poetess. tony

Missing each other! ! Love and life! With memories. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Thanks guys... your comments are so very appreciated x

Beautiful poem, may it light out all dark heart :)

Well penned.. liked it... thanks for sharing