Friday, December 12, 2008

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started as nothing i was
thought of trying
i wanted to do it by myself
never thought I'd need someone
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Glennish Gemperoa
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Joscelyn Alderdice 26 January 2009

This is a very sweet poem. I'm sure many children feel this way, and you have found a way to express that :) Well done!

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Manonton Dalan 27 December 2008

very nice poem. keep on writing. if possible try writing poems about nature. thanks.md

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 December 2008

You've done well.Thank you for this nice piece of poetry.Do write more to teach us all as well. Edward Kofi Louis.

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