Monday, September 17, 2012

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I wonder what life would be
without the opposite sides
could happiness live,
without the existence of sadness
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Kelvin Owusu
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Nurain Ali-balogun 25 September 2012

I wonder what life will be if there is no ice as there is fire, if there is no day as there is night and if there is no man as there is woman. Brilliant poem you wrote, I have a feeling 'you did this justice'.

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Nader Baheri 21 September 2012

that's right.at least we can try even if we don't reach the success. awesome mucha gracias

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Lovable Wisdom 19 September 2012

This poem at first had me curious as to who she was? But in the end you rapped it up very well

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Stevie Taite 17 September 2012

A simple outlook when we stop and ponder, ying yang dark light. Penned well! I like!

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Valerie Dohren 17 September 2012

Life is all about opposites and striking a balance - good one.

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