Tuesday, June 9, 2009

Truth X Comments

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We were sitting in a booth
Nows the time to tell the truth
I never really liked you
I'm sorry I couldn't be honest with you
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Deborah Cromer 03 July 2009

I can understand so much in this poem.2nd line down, now's-needs an apostrophe to make it read better, or better yet-now is? 15th line down, truth is spelled wrong. Other than those 2 minor things, I can relate alot to this poem. I read your poetry when I can, so please don't get irritated if I come across a word that can be better. Consider is free editing? Your works are important. I love poetry. All poetry.

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Uriah Hamilton 09 June 2009

Love is tight when you're young, maybe not existent as you get older.

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