Flecks of joy flick through bounty of beauty
blessing slips over grin sparking over stone
as moonlit flits across the darkness of door
soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons
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i can see a painting in pastels, the verdent green, and the azure blue sky makes a beautifull, poem, after my heart.it touches the soul.thanks for sharing!
lovely, insight. life's complexity has been woven so poetically.
This is an excellent write -truth of reason comes from the heart
deep...and thoughtful. 'yet not divine but from a true heart unknown graces of beauty yet trudges through barriers'. wonderful. thank you.
I find this poem truth of reason to be very deep, it is an excellent piece.
The poem is a pastel with colors that are seen by reflection in a virtual mirror, which is is the TRUTH OF REASON..........of mind...excellent ..10++++
Its very true... Tranquility has to find the Reasoning going on low profile Most of our so-called reasoning consists of Finding ways for going on believing the same again and again. Once in Tranquilitiy... rest all reasons fall in line. I could understand this poem, so in my above lines. Good read.. but a bit hard to digest at one read.
truth is always in our mind and in hearts, when it is spoken, it is therefore the truth of reason....this is a nice work..naizz
mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow yet know time and space even differs by creed of variety knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within mirror never fails to find its image...a new theory, beautiful to wonder about..a deep sound from the valley of the history of seeking soul, words spring from that fall as tears of mind in a slumber..10++++
magnificent…profound...and selfless. …… divine but from a true heart unknown graces of beauty yet trudges through barriers'. restrained poem...excellent…… truth is the reason to be agree with vidiji Vidi Writes (5/28/2009 2: 30: 00 AM) Good read.. but a bit hard to digest at one read. cheers