Saturday, May 25, 2013

Truth (No 1) Comments

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Should I kill the shadow of mine? Lo
That walks with me where ever I go
More stronger it is in the bright light
In darkness weaken more, have sight
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Aftab Alam
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David Wood 27 May 2013

Boiling orange peep'd in the east. Lovely words Aftab.

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Ruby Mostazir 27 May 2013

i like it da way you named da sun as boiling orange. great poem......

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Gajanan Mishra 26 May 2013

Allah! the great nourishes us, Allh taught the mankind in many ways. I salute the almighty, the omnipresent.

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Wahab Abdul 26 May 2013

the shadow seeks refuse at day break...''‘I seek refuse in Thy day break’ wonderful it has the inner meaning with profound significance and insinuation...10

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