Sunday, July 13, 2008

Truth Is Evident Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walk into my world,
The concrete prayers of the city,
Children laugh at bus stops
And wild roses cling to a broken fence
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 14 July 2008

A spare and beautiful write. You engage emotion with imagery.

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Sandra Fowler 13 July 2008

Superb imagery. You have a rare gift. Write on, my friend. As always, Sandra

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 July 2008

'Truth Is Evident' certainly said well. Fine poem! 10/10

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Tai Chi Italy 13 July 2008

The image you present in he first stanza is stark and yet one of innocent hope Uriah! Yes! the truth is evident indeed....Wow! you are a great poet...smiling at you, Tai

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