Saturday, January 12, 2013

Truth In You Comments

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Raise your hand
Against the sky
If you are fallen again
Dare the body on the ground
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

This poem is espicially meant for womankind. It fights against the worst treatment to womankind like domestic violence, and harassment. Here poetess encourages the women through her ink to be courageous and to follow truth. Women should build strength from each weakness. They should stand strong like oak tree. They should be confident but never stubborn. They should enjoy their rights. Dear Soul, as per your quotation from Sir M.D Nair '' A woman is not about live in beauty, women have a mission in their life and other life, like a mother is a base for their children future. you have rights to have education to share opinion but never cross your womanhood. And life is shared for every person to live in their rights. If you are oppressed then claim your right not for self but for life, and the future because every human has heart to feed. You are not mean to compete to claim position of men but rights is your right''. Dear Soul you have so nicely and astutely inscribed this poem. I quote... Life gives options Only in the clear vision There are solutions in any situation Strong women won't cry over weaknesses From each weakness is how they build strength A strength then step you to be stronger Stronger, fearless like men ****************************** Never afraid If you fall again Fist your hand Against the sky Because of you A strong woman Born with rights Truth In you Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2016

Protect the human race! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Frank James Davis 17 April 2013

Wise poetic advice for both sexes. Hopefully, Soul, some will listen.

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Neela Nath Das 30 January 2013

Soul, a nice message you conveyed thru this poem.Women should be mentally strong.Women are not only a playthings of some people with basic instincts. But, it's time taking matter.Thanks for focusing light on this burning topic.

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Jinal Oswal 25 January 2013

Hi Soul, it is a remarkable act from your side. Everyone should know that respect and honor comes first. Wonderful poem! ! !

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Valsa George 21 January 2013

A wonderful assertion of woman's strength and greatness! She shouldn't remain a weakling, she should look within and imbibe strength from inside and never be let down by what others say! A great exhortation to the fair gender to rise up and clamour for their rights! ! A powerful write, Soul! !

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I agree with Valerie and share the feeling that women still have to ascend much more. The pieces of advice given to women are welcome..The format is great next.. A unique Soul poem! Please, consider editing here and there if you don`t mind....

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Nader Baheri 18 January 2013

not only this is confirmed by all women but its for the men either. the messages i think is written for every one not just the women.even the men, to be strong and not to be weak, fist our hand against the weakness. women have the beauty like the Venus but all of them have the power to be even Isis. although this shows your tact but it takes so long.i mean for women to protect themselves from being taken advantage or not being abused and for men to respect.this is humanity and the one who rapes doesnt know about humanity. so i think women can not be protected, each of them can protect themselves.i like the line which refers to respecting all women as if they are our moms or our sisters. muchas gracias for sharing~nb

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Saadat Tahir 17 January 2013

Essence of rose Touch you a beauty Not the only eyes to see Stand strong like root of oak Brave as grass even in the desert Without any doubt in self Spirit in woman renew Truth In you great message...lovely lines, contemporary and persuasive liked

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Kanav Justa 16 January 2013

The message was so clearly expressed... well done

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Kieran J96 14 January 2013

This is definitely a great message, one well written and also one that everyone should pay more attention too.

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Poetheart Morgan 13 January 2013

A true hymn to us, woman. Not just about our citizenship, you went much further. But our feminine essence.Thanks for that Soul. Belíssimo. Loved

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Valerie Dohren 13 January 2013

Women are entitled to be respected equally alongside men - there is still a long way way to go as, deep down in their psyche, men continue to think themselves to be superior. This is in evidence, for example, where men get paid more for doing the same job. We each have our roles to play, and one should not be seen as inferior to the other. Good write Soul, as ever.

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Shahzia Batool 13 January 2013

Wonderful Soul! A strong message in the lines bearing a universal quality! the images used are very apt, right and relevant to the point you wish to convey...thanks for writing this...

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