Sunday, November 23, 2008

Truth Everlasting Comments

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ocean waves beating up against the beach
the cool water against my feet
faces in the rocks looking up to the sky
the ocean waves reaching forever high.
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louis rams
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Linda Winchell 03 December 2008

Beautiful write Sir Louis! Linda

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Erica Buenrostro 25 November 2008

i love this poem.. its beautiful. i love how you discribe everything.: ]

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I love the visions viewed on this poem.. I love how it shows so much imagination great write.. Wonderful.... Krista

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Gave me the picture of the beach until the seagull they have pooped on me....LOL. Well back to the poem it is another beautiful poem by you. Great Job!

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