Put honestly it sounds harsh, but I understand what you are trying to put across in your poem. I like it.
In different words I feel the same way - God comes before everything and everyone. He's first on my list.
Attaining God is the supreme pleasure of all. Good thoughts Gajanan, Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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Put honestly it sounds harsh, but I understand what you are trying to put across in your poem. I like it. In different words I feel the same way - God comes before everything and everyone. He's first on my list. Attaining God is the supreme pleasure of all. Good thoughts Gajanan, Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn