Thursday, September 11, 2008

Truth (By Mimi C. Mata) Comments

Rating: 3.3

I roam barren fields
Ebony velvet descending
Seeping beneath my skin
As emotions unforseen
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Mimi Mata
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Ray Quesada 05 October 2012

this poem is like being in a soft, shadowy dream. i wouldn't call this Dark, even with the line about being poisoned by fruit... it's mysterious and yet there isn't really anything confusing about it. a great mixture. two thumbs up :) please feel free to share your thoughts on some of mine!

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