Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Truth And Lies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember to always tell the truth
Then people will belive you
Because you're the one that'll lose
If what you say isn't true
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Sasha Julia
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Afzal Shauq 07 August 2009

Ever heard of the boy who cried wolf? He lied, he made up tales, When his danger was real he had no proof, And that is where he fails its a sweet tale like poem and done in a perfect way and seems to me you ahve enough ability to write more good poems too.. this is a truth based.. it happens like that..hope you like my poetry mine too 10/10

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