Truth and Change
You lost all your fights
because you were
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Dear Rose Marie Juan-austin, Hello, absolutely you are right, no all the changes would be positive, some times people want to fix some things but in the end they damage it completely, your wise reading always opening a new door to understanding the text differently, brilliant, Kind regards
A beautiful poem that only a Poet who is perceptive and sensitive to what is happening around him can weave and deliver. A Poet knowledgeable in political changes and machineries. A Poet who had a wide array of experiences as regards humanity. To my Poem List and 10++.
Revolution advocates change to a system that is not responsive to the needs of the people. But sometimes the people behind the revolution are not true enough for the people and thus creating another cycle of chaotic system and might even worse delivering the people to total darkness
Life sometimes is not fair. We advocate change and fight for it but we find ourselves on the losing end despite it is crystal clear that we are on the right path. We don't know if the system is flawed or the people themselves.
Dear great poet Susan Williams thank you for your lovely comment, yes you are right it might happen to all of us and that is the nature of this funny life, stay well and keep writing
" May hope find the right door and knock suddenly! " - - - -I like that! ! ! May that happen to all of us! Charming.10++++
Changes and challenges! ! ! Moving along with the muse of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This is such a wonderful poem that pierces through the heart. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. 'But soon even that will wither. Then confused you ask: How will it tolerate the scorching sun of Truth's revolution? '...is awesome.10++++
Thanks Dear poet Anil, I hope you have enjoyed it, your amazing comment it means so much too me, with Regards
Well done again Soran. Another beautifully written poem. Superb and captivating. It is mived emotions of the inner heart or deep concerns of the inner mind. It's one to let the reader to decide. It seems to me to balance finely on a knife-edge. Loved it! ! 10++ and added to my deep and food for thought locker. Thanks again Soran and take care my friend.
part 2/I would appreciate your hard works, congratulation..you are very honest and trustful person, meanwhile this lovely comment is one of the best gift I have ever had, really the pen is speechless to say any thing else. forgive me..
part1/ Dear poet and friend Shaun you are very good poetry writer and reader too, I know you can't live without the poem, It seems you want to correct the direction of life through your poems, as Arthur Rimbaud tried 150 years ago, that is why you want to capture every single moment in life and make it a wonderful poem,
Truth's revolution is always scorching, It happens in your poetry Soran