Long ago the Indian soil
was graced by a saint and his disciple
who traversed long distances
of mind, knowledge and spaces.
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Indeed a reminder of today's world where the guru n the ideal disciples are just ideal concepts... A witty but thought provoking poem... My 10...! !
A very popular incident narrated by the Zen Masters to their pupils....nicely versed all through, dear....and it happens to be my favourite.... thanks for it....
wow! this is really something! Did you make up the story or have you adapted it from somewhere? Either ways, its great that you have translated something that should be in prose to poetry. the rhyme scheme is interesting.
The mind should control the senses. if all the senses control the mind, then this kind of feelings only will arise. A good moral lesson, this poem teaches at the end.
A good moral. Nice verse.