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Fishing for wood
on the edge of my
mattress
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This is indeed a fine piece the flow is so well constructed and the language is wonderful.
Fascinating poem. A great read and thought provoking! Is there an impotent, too quick to climax, archetype of the average man here, or am I reading too much into the dripping, failing, clown, dead, awake man?
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7/21/2025 5:14:53 PM # 1.0.0
This is an evocative poem, Mary.....keep writing...and don't be afraid to edit to perfection....You're off to a great start.