Truth Comments

Very well done narration of the transformation from naive, care-free, and innocent to betrayed, bitter, and hardened. Captures the progression of a life with craft.

ur rite this poem sounds very personal,2 u i loved readin this it might b better than 7 whispers truth is brill. Go on girl

A wonderful poem, the words are beautiful, only you can express them that way cheers sylvia

There's such an obvious innocence in all your words, only time can tell if it will disappear, as I have yet to decide whether it benefits your writing, or diminishes it's potential

love your writing style and all our experiences help us grow..plus where woud all these words come from that we're able to convey? another great job!

good insights, tells it like a story being read aloud. very nice