Monday, March 19, 2012

Truth Comments

Rating: 4.3

I found our love shaped like a rose
on a lonely empty street,
It seems so strange, so sad, to find it
lying at my feet.
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Perry Biggerstaff
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Martina Moriarty Mc Carthy 22 February 2017

Love is a powerful find and Loss....Loved reading thank you for sharing

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Susan Williams 02 May 2016

I keep rereading this and rereading this. It haunts me. I feel there is something simmering just below its surface. Your poem tells a sad story and gives us warning but I keep hoping that is all it is- -a story, a fictional piece that is not in any way autobiographical. One thing I do know- -this is well-written.

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* Sunprincess * 03 June 2015

.....hmm, I suppose this rose wasn't the perfect one afterall. ...I love roses, I feel some are more beautiful than others :) ★

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Maryanne Richards 10 May 2014

A beautiful poem of love.

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John Brown 25 September 2012

What a sad poem. I was nearly in tears.

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