Trust The Universe Comments

Very fine poem...rea really good poem.....thanks.....

excellent poem... very original and creative mine has never ever been yet selected BY PH read me if you will MY MOMS SMILES

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautiful poem with special attraction. Thanks and congrstulations for being selected as thae poem of the day.

Suzanne, being who I am, I wonder what you mean by universe. This is another instance where I’d like to sit across a table from a writer—you in this case—and have a conversation. That aside, I recognize in this poem someone who can write and look forward to reading more by you. -Glen

Suzanne, congratulations on your poem of the day.. iip.. James McLain

I simply hold myself steady. The road ahead is long and uncertain. I must preserve my energy. I must keep parts of me in reserve. Keep pushing on no matter what, Success will be all. Joshua.

Your writing presents us with the conundrum of living within a vast mechanism of relentless entropy, where every particulate reality causes the next particulate reality, and seemingly negates the concept of free will. And yet, I sit here, thinking, writing, deciding what next to type. It is my small garden, and even though the greater machinations of existence remain beyond my grasp, I will tend my garden. And remain thankful to the Creator of vast machinations.

As we all must engage the deep questions of existence, and so much of our culture today is aimed at keeping us from contemplative thought, the practitioners of poetry have even more responsibility to use our craft to confront our readers with thought-invoking writing. This piece does exactly that.

Infinite wisdom! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I must tend my tiny garden. I must mend my fence and stock my shelves....... wanderfully penned, thanks for sharing the poem

Your poem and philosophy is so true about life and our relationship with the Universe..nice poem..

a wonderful poem of believing in one's own ability even though sometimes things are taken out of our hands? ..............well written Suzanne

Beautiful poem crafted. Congrats for the members POD.

It's a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Awesome.

This is awesome poetry. Gripping from the fist line to the last. Enjoyed. Deserved to be poem of the day. Congrats.

I must listen to the infinite wisdom Hidden in their shining silence........returning sanity., liked your poem very much dear poetess. tony congratulations for being the poet of the day. God bless u

Great write.. Congratulations Poet.10+

I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

A sparkling piece of poetry! Each line has carried some substance! Magnificent poetic expression with insightful details...! I find you have focused on faith, patience, and truth which have the key parameters of your own perception to life! The last two lines concludes with a precise message! Many congratulations for this amazing piece of work being chosen as the POD!

we must learn from nature and its pace. Lovely poem and a great message to all of us, impatient people!