Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Trust Or Betrayal Comments

Rating: 4.1

Why did this happen to me
is a question i ask repeatedly
that why do i live in pieces
for the sake of searching the pieces
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prashant shaurya
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2010

Now life seems ugly, dark and sad for i have lost someone i always had so i am coming back to u dear jane by treading the path that leads to your lane...! ! ! ............wrong once done can't be undone as opportunity is slipped out of hand.. so much damage is done and now something worth while has to come from self only.......Lovely piece of writing n i liked it.....10 read mine cuckoo....bidding farewell... lying in bed

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Maria Shipka 08 December 2009

beautiful confession it is...everything needs its time....I´m sure your Jane will it value much :) +10

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A very heartfelt poem prashant where you are working through your feelings. This is what poetry is good for. I really like the last stanza too. Well done! Karin Anderson

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Sameera Sameer 09 August 2009

Now life seems ugly, dark and sad for i have lost someone i always had so i am coming back to u dear jane by treading the path that leads to your lane...! ! ! I LOVED THE LAST STANZA! ! ! ! ! !

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