Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Trust My 'Love'? ? ? Comments

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you say 'i love u'i feel its a lie.
you say 'trust me'why should i?
i want to forgive you
ah! that's the thing i can't do
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 April 2011

The sentiments are really awesome. At the same time I feel sorry for the poem because it doesn't fulfil the criteria of a good poetry. I am really sorry to see the symbols instead of the whole words. You have used the writing style of SMS which is not fair. The poem might have been sublime if it had been written in a proper way. I am disappointed.

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