Sunday, March 30, 2008

Trust Me With Your Heart Comments

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Why does your heart grow doubtful dear?
Tense and beating, full of fear.
I keep with me your everlasting love,
and bless the day God sent you from above.
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volence patel
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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Beautiful rendition from inner recesses of the heart. Lofty and passionate verse elegantly penned with clarity of thought and mind. A smooth flow for joy embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A powerful creation Volence. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Vanessa Everts 17 February 2009

The only way to make a man trustworthy is to trust him. nice poem!

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