Tuesday, November 22, 2005

Trust Me Comments

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What have I done to lose your trust?
Can you please explain to me...
Why is it that you seem to think
I'm trying to break free?
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Mary Nagy
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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 November 2005

Great poem, perfect last line. Best H

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Allan James Saywell 22 November 2005

perhaps he is blind or short sighted or perhaps he comes from mars just like the rest of us Warm Regards Allan

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Ghada Shahbender 22 November 2005

Read this softly in his ear - if it doesn't work nothing ever will :)

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Ernestine Northover 22 November 2005

Give him a big 'kiss' that'll do it. Your usual high class write here Mary. Love Ernestine XXX

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Uriah Hamilton 22 November 2005

There's a great line by John Lennon: I didn't mean to hurt you, I'm just a jealous guy.

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