Thursday, June 18, 2009

Trust Is Now Untrusted... Comments

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i trusted you once before,
but now my heart is sore,
because i found out,
the truth always there,
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Laura Venter
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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

'and dont look back dont say sorry i wont cut you slack because you are now, untrusted' Nice poem,10+++

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Malini Kadir 18 June 2009

really nice child......you have written with a maturity far beyond.....keep going It is passion that gives trust.....actions that reign forces it....keep it up!

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