Friday, November 30, 2012

Trust And Believe Me Comments

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No one knows how empty my life is without you.
No one knows when I am crying that I am crying for you.
When they think I am laughing,
I'm still wishing you were near.
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Guenael Roodjerry Oristel
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Rajendran Muthiah 04 December 2012

The poet has dealt with an obsolete theme but in a new way by adding the phrase 'Nobody knows...'All kinds of appeal the poem makes. The emotions of a nice heart are expressed in smooth lines.Excellent.

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