I want you, but can I trust you?
The things you say excite me,
but I’ve heard them said before:
sweet words dry up too soon,
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'I am so sore, so scarred, so scared' is such a powerful line. The sibilance gives the words a stutter, a sob maybe; so true to the poet persona's reluctance to trust. Poignant and potent - an excellent poem. S :)
sweet words isn't everything. truly trust is very important between friends too good work and I hope u write a new one good luck
Trust is everything in a relationship, when trust has gone it is hard to trust anyone again, well-penned piece, Lynda xx
What a beautiful poem about learning to trust again, a leap of faith for sure x
wow, great poem...truely amazing.