Thursday, February 7, 2008

Trust Comments

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I want you, but can I trust you?
The things you say excite me,
but I’ve heard them said before:
sweet words dry up too soon,
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Wild Bill Balding
COMMENTS
Marisol Smith 17 January 2009

wow, great poem...truely amazing.

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Susan Jarvis 31 August 2008

'I am so sore, so scarred, so scared' is such a powerful line. The sibilance gives the words a stutter, a sob maybe; so true to the poet persona's reluctance to trust. Poignant and potent - an excellent poem. S :)

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Rehab Helmy 17 August 2008

sweet words isn't everything. truly trust is very important between friends too good work and I hope u write a new one good luck

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Lynda Robson 17 July 2008

Trust is everything in a relationship, when trust has gone it is hard to trust anyone again, well-penned piece, Lynda xx

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julesx 64 06 May 2008

What a beautiful poem about learning to trust again, a leap of faith for sure x

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