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In the snowstorm, I'm walking, seeing nothing
I won't get lost, I know, as it's your trail I follow.
The white snowflakes fall over my head
I have no doubt, you're shading my head.
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Lyn Paul
13 April 2015
Through my veins, frost is running But I feel warm as I'm thinking......... Great line. Oh to the joy and the release of singing.
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8/3/2025 11:34:19 AM # 1.0.0
Snowcorps I think you meant snowflakes. Perhaps would be better if you changed, your footprint remains, in line 5, to: Your footprints remain. Other than that you did a stellar job!
So much the better, thank you!