Saturday, January 17, 2015

Trust Comments

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Trust
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Helpless it is as an infant
Newly born,
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 January 2015

Beautiful poem. Infant is so helpless, but relaxes safely in its mother's lap. Captivating lines... Total trust comes from safety And safety comes from trust......Loved reading it. +++10

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 January 2015

Beautiful poem. Infant is so helpless, but relaxes safely in its mother's lap. Captivating lines... Total trust comes from safety And safety comes from trust......Loved reading it. +++10

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Rajesh Thankappan 18 January 2015

Total trust comes from safety And safety comes from trust. This is a commendable poem. A baby born into the world is frail and helpless. Slowly it forms a bond of love and trust with the people who attend to it. 10/10

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Valsa George 17 January 2015

A baby born right into the world places absolute trust in the one who suckles it and who sustains and takes care of it.... mostly its mother! It is so helpless in the initial stages, yet it survives under someone's tender care! Here is an equation of trust and safety! Great poem Deepak! The inalienable bond between an infant and its mother is beautifully put!

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