Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Trust Comments

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Denied my care
denied my soul
when it comes to trust
i shall uphold
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Jonas Blueford
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Kaila George 27 June 2012

Mr Blueford i love your write, its actually really good, and if you were like me, not understand what a stanza is then let me demonstrate to you what it means. first stanza the sun shone down on her face its warmth its rays captured beauty in a trance Secound stanza Her eyes were closed as she smiled up to the sun her body stealth naked in gold Third stanza the beauty they saw took their breath away they witnessed a goodess in beautys sun rays.

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