Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Trust Comments

Rating: 4.8

They love me, they say,
They'll always be there, they say.
But...
She loved me too, didn't she?
...
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Preston James
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Christopher Cariad 18 August 2011

Well versed, showing great experience with the subject!

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Efran Menny 17 August 2011

Well written poem & very honest 'So why trust? It only ends badly So what's the use? ' Is a great line, it brings back a bitter feeling of nostalgia from a previous relationship.

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 August 2011

True and trustworthy people is a test.They come always after a series of failures and nearabaout experiences so that you can have analysis of good and bad.Well said message here. Do read mine-ACKNOWLEDGEMENT-somewhat similar like this including the irregular behaviour of people when it comes the word trust.

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Preston James

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