Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Trust Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I Trust You, Will You Break It?
If I Give You Freedom, Will You Abuse It?
Make Me Look Like A Fool.
With Freewill Comes Limits!
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Mozafar Ali
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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