Friday, May 1, 2009

Trust Comments

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Chugging train at a station stops
Passengers hop
Passengers Shop
Baggage is dropped
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Lady Grace 26 July 2009

Trust is but a bubble thing; a silent burst, just a hollow ring. Baleful swallow in a cemetery twitters. Profane an hushed silence glitters. No more views an no more cues. Time to alight an pay your dues...great lines..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

'Trust is but a bubble thing; a silent burst, just a hollow ring.' These are wonderful lines of this poem which is full of marvelous metaphors. Brilliant write,10 with pleasure.

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