Your whisper pounds my heart's rood
Rushing throbbed tsunamis throughout
So that the pulsing of my tepid blood
Expands even whisper into a shout.
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Interesting that readers like mixing metaphors with a romantic-sentimental appeal.
Sorry, Susan, I didn't go to the Thesaurus at all on this poem. Like most of my poems these words introduced themselves to me. I hardly knew them. And that's what worries me most about this effort. Anything else?
The melody in this poem is amusing. The very first line itself soothes the mind and the love touches its zenith when you say we have met before and finally the mark left by beloved is the fragrance....Good write. Thanks for sharing.
Loved reading this poem repeatedly and enjoyed its music and mysticism that is ingrained from beginning to the end. Thanks, Dear Poet (Cat Tiger is too far-fetched) .
Wonderful poem flowing with melody and confidence. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
A poem of controlled passion and clever choice of words.. A wonderful write and a pleasing one to read..
a fantastic poem and use of hymnal form.
yes a theme which haunts many lives finding its way into many poems in interesting styles, a theme which we shall return to often :)
What is the theme, Terry? I wonder if you know. I'm not sure I do.