Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Truly We'Ve Met Before Comments

Rating: 4.0

Your whisper pounds my heart's rood
Rushing throbbed tsunamis throughout
So that the pulsing of my tepid blood
Expands even whisper into a shout.
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Cat Tiger
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Terry Craddock 30 November 2015

yes a theme which haunts many lives finding its way into many poems in interesting styles, a theme which we shall return to often :)

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Cat Tiger 01 December 2015

What is the theme, Terry? I wonder if you know. I'm not sure I do.

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A. Madhavan 30 November 2015

Interesting that readers like mixing metaphors with a romantic-sentimental appeal.

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Susan Williams 30 November 2015

maybe a trip too many to the Thesaurus

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Cat Tiger 01 December 2015

Sorry, Susan, I didn't go to the Thesaurus at all on this poem. Like most of my poems these words introduced themselves to me. I hardly knew them. And that's what worries me most about this effort. Anything else?

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Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

A very tranquil write! Indeed thanks for sharing KW

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M Asim Nehal 30 November 2015

The melody in this poem is amusing. The very first line itself soothes the mind and the love touches its zenith when you say we have met before and finally the mark left by beloved is the fragrance....Good write. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2015

Nice work with the thirst of life.

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Rajnish Manga 30 November 2015

Loved reading this poem repeatedly and enjoyed its music and mysticism that is ingrained from beginning to the end. Thanks, Dear Poet (Cat Tiger is too far-fetched) .

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 November 2015

Wonderful poem flowing with melody and confidence. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Souren Mondal 30 November 2015

A poem of controlled passion and clever choice of words.. A wonderful write and a pleasing one to read..

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Jasbir Chatterjee 30 November 2015

a very elemental poem; thanks for sharing.

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a fantastic poem and use of hymnal form.

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a wonderful passionated poem, ,

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Anjali Sinha 18 July 2009

wow beautiful i think too truly we've met before -10 anjali

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