Tuesday, July 3, 2012

True To Myself Comments

Rating: 2.8

I thought things were different
just minutes ago we have danced
in our auras
entwined.
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Kasia Fedyk
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 July 2012

When the aura entwined, we might have stood closer to something. This something may mean a person, victory or anything, but we are interested in it, whether 'it' has interest in us, is another question and that question is more important to us than anything else..so no one is lonely in this world...

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Shouvik Roy 04 July 2012

i so love the simplicity in these lines...beautiful...10 from me...the grief is expressed in such a sophisticated way...nice job Kasia..

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Neela Nath Das 04 July 2012

Kasia loved to read.Deep love for someone makes so sentimental if he ignores somehow.Beautiful.Sounds like dramatic monologue.10+++

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