True Story Of A Broken Heart Comments

I'd say this is quite the depressing poem, lots out there will relate in a mass scale from different angles...so deeply drowned in hollowness of a miserable and undying existing life... I think in a way i can explain the ideology of this poem in one sentence quite simply, this is a line from one of my upcoming poem - 'hate is simply love turned upside down'. P.S - Not to be rude or anything, you may want to avoid any hint or expression of swearing or using harsh/dirty words (such as the word at the end of the 3rd stanza) while writing poetry. poetry is of beauty...and even if you're writing a poem that depicts 'hatred' or an action of something that's not appealing, try to express that - in a way which won't be insulting. build up a positive image in your readers mind even if it's of something terrible...not what you wrote in that last line of 3rd stanza, that's a turn off for many...I hope you take this as a friendly advice to improve, not in a negative sense. but apart from that, Yoonoos is correct - this is a great piece for sure.