True Self Comments

p.s. Vaibhav, re your questioning message about my restricted computer use? i (sometimes) follow my mate's orders for how to live my life, and her orders are to not use computer too much, fearing for my health, e.g. my eyesight. someday you may find out that being an does not make one able to always do as one pleases! ! bri :)

(cont.) 2 - " Then why dispose your uniqueness" .." dispose OF your" last stanza: delete first comma i'd type " Nor is there..." " Live a life like how you're destined to live" ...HOW does one do THAT? ? if destiny is a valid concept, how does one know what theirs is? ? ? you have tackled some interesting thoughts, but how well did you consider them? bri :)

1 - line 3: succeedED i neither believe in 'god' nor that human minds are made 'perfect'. MY mind is a PERFECT example! stanza 2: i disagree with both statements. one would not have to prepare for true agony if 'god' erased such stuff from Earth! so, i'm no longer a god-believer and you still are. we still can coexist and be friends as we are now here. :) (cont.)

There's god above overlooking your journey, no other soul similar to that of yours Love yourself... the problem of the false self and the true self was always a concern of the poets, mystics and philosophers. you have brought it here in this poem.. thank you dear poet. tony