Sunday, August 11, 2013

True Romance Comments

Rating: 5.0

How can I tell you what I feel,
If your not even here or near,
I saw you, 'once upon a time'
Made out of music, verse, and rhyme,
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Sandra Feldman
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Dimitrios Galanis 05 January 2016

At lucky to grasp //Rejoicing over memory's journey to the past, to the sparking moments with the gleam of promising love, to moments intact by insolence of betraying facts, regard happy the life's journey as far as it lasts. Your ticket: the eyes' reciprocal contracts upon the bliss of those devine sparkles. Feel happy at their emotions' hoard, wealth of your feeling's glow as long as your life lasts at lucky to grasp.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 August 2013

Yes, true romance! You are really very romantic. Many of us have had crushes like this, but how many can say so beautifully as you have done? 10/10.

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Valerie Dohren 12 August 2013

Very sweet Sandra - that movie star perhaps, or pop idol? All your poems are so lovely and romantic.

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Sina Farajzadeh 12 August 2013

Wow. It's really a perfect love poem. With nice use of rhyming. Like it. Thanks for sharing. I'd be glad to see your comments on my poetry. Thanks again.

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Yasmin Khan 12 August 2013

Such moments of pure love flicker like candles in the darkness of life, a nice write

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Heather Wilkins 11 August 2013

this is a beautiful poem sad but lovely content. very touching. I met someone once it was a dream come true. but so short lived. It was not meant to be. God interrupted there is still a special place in my heart for him. love this write

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