True Purpose Comments

Kaz, this is an excellent poem. I love the way that you have maintained the momentum. The opening line is great, though I will admit that I thought this was going to be a 'pity-me piece of doggrel. Thankfully it is far from that. You have given us a really tight poem that never veres off and uses a simple language to present itself. I think that you show the intelligence of placing words in an order to get maximum effect and allowing the reader to come to the poem on their terms.

beautiful written poem...lovely share! ! !