Monday, November 17, 2008

True Poem Comments

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I m working on a poem thats so true, I cant show it to anyone.
I could never show it to anyone.
Because it says exactly what I think, and what I think scares me.
Sometimes it pleases me.
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Maryam Khan
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 November 2008

Go and write what you feel and show it to the world.You'll feel better soon after.Nice writes Maryam! !

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Colin Jeffery 20 November 2008

The passion created by the Muse at its best

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Aijaz Asif 20 November 2008

an excellent write with deep thoughts....do write whatever you wants to write cause it will sooth your mind, it does to me, whenever im so depresed or hurt i do write my feelings on a piece of paper and it sooths me alot.....keep writting you have a good talent to make readers feel your words and thanks for encouraging comment on my poem 'No Regrets' 10++ rgds Asif

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