Friday, November 3, 2006

True Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

My hearts been ripped out
Definitely, without a doubt
My insides have been ripped about
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The Poet In Pain
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Tristan Love-day 07 February 2014

i rlly like the way you wrote this, keep u the gr8 wrk :)

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Brandi Knecht 06 December 2006

love the poem and its gonna get the teacher to give me an a for the day brandi i have also felt that kind of pain

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Janua Catt Alonzo 14 November 2006

a very realistic one, nice piece u got here yan, i love it, , , , Takecare....J.catt

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Onida 07 November 2006

a real way of expressing pain.well done

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