Saturday, November 10, 2012

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Letting the one you love go
Is probably something youll never know
They might not understand your reason
But all will work in the right season
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Jaylon Thibodeaux
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Nice message. But I have to say it the line, Letting the one you love go Is probably something youll never know is a little judgemental. Becareful of judgment statments in your poems in the future, but other than that I really liked the poem.

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Aditya Mudbhary 13 November 2012

A nice hopeful poem, but you give away the baseline of the meaning of the poem too easily, Apart from that a nice poem.

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Rebecca Adams 12 November 2012

Its really good gives hope and reason to break ups I like it

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