Monday, July 2, 2018

True Morn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look at the flames flicker. Watch the candle burn.
Watch the seas ripple. Feel the oceans turn. Night,
skies map out, what we really ought to learn..
Think twice.. His heart, his love, will never burn!
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Rebecca Navarre
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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 July 2018

Such a wonderful write, Flower....10++++

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Rebecca Navarre 09 July 2018

Thank You! ! ! .. Bernard, For such a beautiful, and kind reply! ! ! .. Your poetry is heartful, soulful, and deep... And with ever such beauty you speak! ! ! ... Thank you again, :) God bless! ! ! ... Many blessings, may you find! ! ! ...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 July 2018

Flicker gives amazing flame. We feel oceans that turns into new realm. God's love shows us light. We get right wisdom. An excellent sharing is done...10

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Rebecca Navarre 09 July 2018

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For such a deeply beautiful and thoughtful reply! ! ! .. :) Your poetry gives us wisdom and light, that opens the heart, and brings joy and insight! ! ! .. Thank you again for your patients and being so kind! ! ! .. God Bless! ! ! .. Looking Forward, yet to reading! ! ! .. Please forgive me, I am still behind...

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