True Lover Comments

Nice poem..very cute but were saying in the last line say or stay? the word want is it?

My heart will allways sing of your love, And remain pure as a dove. My love will never fade away, As i decided to walk in your way And i hope you to say..well so intense desire and eanest words too.. i could have reciprocated it withwarmth as there is pure and pure feelings only....lovely write andkeep it up....10 read mine...no separate ways....comehome....miss i miss u

exactly..a very sweet innocent poem..written with feelings in bulk..

Sweet and gentle and soft :)

Once again a tender ode to first love! Nice lyrical flow to your poem. Anna

Hi Elsee - another lovely poem about the intensity of young love. I am intrigued by the last line 'And I hope you to say' To say what 'How much we love you - How much we love your poems? ' or should it be 'And I hope you to STAY'? I love open ended poems they are very enigmatic. Perfect 'poesie petite' another MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.

another awesome poem! ! ! <3

Well thats called true love.

Hey dear Elseee, This poem shows how much you are dedicated to your love. Keep up machi dont give up

this is a short nice poem, coming out from an innocent heart, nice to read, like a wedding confession.. nice write..