Thursday, April 27, 2023

True Love Will Emerge From Life~ Comments

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Life is a vision of my own treasure that has fallen from the sky.
I sank into a pit of love that was too steep for me to climb,
Now I regret that why did I wish for a life in human form?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Martinez Salotori 29 April 2023

Intriguing poem

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2023

A hearty poem dear Asim ji with love for our fellow beings.......10+++

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 29 April 2023

More often we remain a chameleon. Well-conceived well expressed

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David Wood 28 April 2023

That is the rich tapestry of life, and love it's mystery.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 April 2023

Another brilliantly wonderful poem Asim

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The chameleon that changes colour more frequently as a result of sucking our wishes flees the scene.....beautiful

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