Sunday, September 8, 2013

True Love When I'M With You Comments

Rating: 4.4

Would you tell my heart
Even in a whisper of truth
If there is any mirror
For me to see my true reflection
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2017

It is a great tribute to a father from his lovely daughter. The expression is touching and captivating. There is nice presentation of true love too. Let it be quoted... Beauty, someday may aged Your loves however never wrinkle When each line comes appear on you They only tell me, oh how many years You've caring me... and you still Life can be wiser, love last forever And i see it on you... I appriciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

I see my real reflection in you! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Amitava Sur 07 October 2013

A nice write up with a tribute to her father.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 05 October 2013

A very beautiful poem, a great tribute to true friends and a loving father. Truly a passionate write.

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Jimmy Li 27 September 2013

like your poems, poems with similar views and values often echo

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Yasmin Khan 25 September 2013

a lovely and passionate tribute to father by a daughter

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Valsa George 22 September 2013

Beautiful outpouring of love of a daughter for her father! As we advance in age, we come to realize more and more how much our parents mean to us! ! I am sure, your father will be much pleased to read this!

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Valerie Dohren 20 September 2013

An exquisite poem Soul, a wonderful tribute to your father, and a joy to read. Very well done.

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Farah Ilyas 20 September 2013

indeed stunning tribute by brilliant poet/poetess to his/her father. touching and moving poem, if i say these words in appreciation of your poem, i don't think so it would be complete justice regarding ur poem... more than just stunning tribute, loved it as u wrote it, looks as every core of ur heart was risen while writing. he will be with you Soul, INSHALLAH

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Ramesh Rai 19 September 2013

i have already commented. thank you so much with my heartiest pleasure for you participation with my liking poem. I always wish for long company with your friend.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 19 September 2013

this is a lovely poem, shows your love for your father so much. Until you keep him in your memory, he will be always with you.

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Marvin Brato 19 September 2013

Beautiful, could be a love song!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 September 2013

well narrated, the spirit of the poem is very fine.

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Rekha Mandagere 18 September 2013

True love for humanity is the greatest form of love. The flow, feelings and emotions are of fine quality: -) Soul's special touch for art and humanity: -)

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Heather Wilkins 18 September 2013

excellent intro to your poem. A great tribute

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Khairul Ahsan 18 September 2013

I am touched and moved by this nice tribute. Excellent! May God bless all fathers with such lovely children as the poet who harbour so profound love for them in their hearts! And may God rest Hans VR's father in the best place in the heaven!

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Ruby Mostazir 17 September 2013

beautiful poem......nice: -)

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Kavya . 17 September 2013

a lovely poetic tribute to your dad, he sure must be proud to read this poem dedicated to him...a lovely write

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Payal Parande 16 September 2013

If a country is to be corruption free and become a nation of beautiful minds, I strongly feel there are three key societal members who can make a difference. They are the father, the mother and the teacher. Abdul Kalam a piece full of love and care..sweet innocent perfect love for a father shown by a sweet innocent perfect poet

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Shahzia Batool 15 September 2013

I know i will never be lost Because your love be my lighthouse, ... this is the confidence we all cherish forever...a poem rich in beautiful though nostalgic images...a fine read indeed!

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