Thursday, June 1, 2006

True Love's Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

His eyes show only love for her
And hold no bitter pain,
His lips which caressed her naked form
Will n'er do so again.
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jayne jenkins
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Elya Thorn 01 June 2006

Oh, yes, I love this type of poetry! It's really dark and beautiful. I gave you a 10! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Aisha Sherazi 01 June 2006

Oooooh, very macabre indeed! Very well written! Peace, Aisha

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